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　　With the progress of society and technology,cell phones play a more important role in individual life.An investigation shows that the number of mobile phone users are increasing rapidly.In 1990,it merely have 200,by 2005,the number increased from 500 to 900.

　　There are many factors for the dramatic growth.In the first place, cellphone is easy to carry,and saves students a great deal of time by sending short message to their relatives and classmates.In the second place,another benefit obtained from cellphone is convenience for people to keep up with the latest information they need.

　　There is no denying that cell phones bring about far-reaching impacts on personal life.It must be admitted that,however,there still exist some problems about cellphone such as certain physical disease.Therefore,cellphone still has a long way to go before it becomes mature.

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